As I glance towards the road's end
A cruise starts on its new voyage!
My hopes spring up quite unbend
A new start follows life in earth's stage?
What would I do when I had no job?
Would people eat or hunger anymore?
Death was the end for all needs and sobs
But never can know what else is in store!
Were those wise who abandoned pleasures?
Or did fun lovers make a good choice?
Did I really believe deeds were measures
That judged my end and gave me no voice?
Life and purpose,still a mystery unrevealed
What I wished for, never gave it twice a thought!
Am I living my chance to get my soul healed?
I stare away,seeking the peace a new chance brought!
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Beautifully written with the sweet rhyme in alternate lines...
ReplyDeleteWhere were you all this while dear...
keep writing...
dont give ur fingers any rest from the pen/keyboard... :)
Thanks a lot Bindia! Nice to see you visit my small space again! I hope I can write more frequently :) I hav bloggers block quiet often :D
ReplyDeleteWell written!
ReplyDeletePS : In fact, I found the last two comments pretty inspiring and innovative! ;-)
English Poetry is not my cup of tea, and hence no critical analysis. But as a Common Man, enjoyed reading them!
Josee, thx for visiting my blog..am not very good in any language..but giving it a try in english n malayalam. 2 or 3 malayalam posts undu..do let me knw ur comments!
ReplyDeleteAlready seeing the end of the voyage? [:p]
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