Wishing for a bright new day
Was a dream on every winter grey!
High spirits and fun was summer's way
And I did wish it should always stay!
When all sun fun were wearing away soon
And sweat smells lingered around in June,
I wished I could fly to the coldest part of moon
And thought a cool breeze was the greatest boon!
Come , I call you fall days , cool our eyes a while
With your light chilly winds, let me not strain to smile!
I hope those days are far, when your leaves lay in piles
For heart seems lifeless when, bare trees stretch in miles!
Summer smiles, hearing my woes,
Disappears as if I gave it a blow!
Sends me along a light shower show
And finds me again loving the summer glow!
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ya just what i feel (sigh!)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely wonderful ammu. You have captured all the seasons in you perfect canvas.
ReplyDeletesharikkum thanne ezhuthiyathanooo?
ReplyDelete@rocksea: he he.same pinch..
ReplyDelete@Smitha: thanku dear.
@Valli: ee blog-il ezhuthunnathu muzhuvan njaan thanneyaa..I take it as a compliment :) thanks Valli
My mind swings through the seasons
ReplyDeleteUpong reading this wonderful piece Ammu
Felt like tender leaves sashaying in cool, gentle breeze
Keep writing more Ammu
Glad to know u got the cool pleasant feeling of the gentle wind and rustling leaves..Will definitely keep on writing for all the encouragement am getting!!
ReplyDeleteReally nice poems. So you are really a good poet.All your poems are really good, very lively. You are really a free thinker. Keep on writing.....
ReplyDeleteThanks for your good words Anonymous!
ReplyDeletedi..pls collect your awards from my blog :)
ReplyDeleteHey..thanks Maria!
ReplyDeleteWhen is the next blog coming Ammu ?
ReplyDeleteIts been a while :-)
long time no see!?
ReplyDeletethis poem makes me long for the summer considering the really bad winter this around! :)
ReplyDelete@hari & rocksea: got tht emotional outburst block in my brain for some time..hope to start writing soon..thanks for asking
ReplyDelete@ 偷吃 : i dont know which language this is..i tried chinese translation n it seems u encouraged me..thanks for dropping in.
@mathew: I love ur blog spark..love the way u write..been a silent reader :) thanks for checking out my blog n leaving ur valuable comment.n ya,its really cold this time..waiting for summer to get active again..