Inspired by homeless poor people in cold countries..
When days are dark and numbing cold
Not a tree has a leaf that acts very bold!
For who could stay in the freezing storm
When life makes a blank white transform!
Like nature's mourn, the silence creeps,
Seeking a mate, the cold wind weeps,
Roads disappear like in middle of the sea,
And here we stand, solitude and me!
Ask or not,the weather changes unknown
Wish or not, I need to work to the bone!
No bird came by for a friendly chirp this day
Come hard cold days in life,all stay away!
Let sun shine and colours rise from ground
Friends are many to hold hands around!
The smiles stay lit as long as its bright
Winter awaits, and I stand alone in fright!
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di.. this poem suits my present mood, am feeling all homesick n lonely after coming back from India :(. you can dedicate this poem to me ;). Btw, the foto is also nice.
ReplyDeletePoetic expression of the emotions one would associate with winter..The rhyming lines enchance the feel. Wonderful one Ammu!
ReplyDelete@Maria: Even I felt home sick and lonely coz its been a while i went for vacation! So tht feeling I transformed to a poor man's woes and wrote this
ReplyDelete@Hari: Good to know you captured the dry emotions which was compared to winter. Nice to see your encouraging words as always!!
Nice..
ReplyDeleteLet sun shine and colours rise from ground
Friends are many to hold hands around!
Beautiful blend of emotions...
Thanku Bindia..You are my constant inspirer !! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteliked the winter poem. it is sort of psychologicaly cooling as we are having a hot summer here :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deeba & Rocksea!
ReplyDelete@Rocksea: nice to knw u found a pyshological Cooler effect from my humble poem [compared to ur adipoli poems] :D
beautifully written n so true to wats happening around us..
ReplyDeletereally loved the last line
keep up the good work,
take care :)
Thanks Amal for visiting my blog and sharing your comments!
ReplyDeleteoru Robert Frost touch... at least that tune of the poem as i read :)... well written...
ReplyDeletevow...i take it as a big compliment chrison..thanks a lot..just letting me knw tht someone reads it makes me really happy..few people do that..
ReplyDeletehi there, landed at this blog quite accidentally and I must admit that it was worth, that was a lovely poem and as the prev comment stated, it really did have tat RF touch :)..
ReplyDeleteThanks Anonymous..am truly elated by your words..Do visit often and let me know what you think
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